Almost every fogged sentence is repaired by one move: put a person or an organisation in the subject slot and the real action in the verb slot. Choose a subject and a verb for each sentence below and watch it rebuild — then check the word count, because the excess falls out on its own.
The sentence as written
1 · Who or what does something here?
2 · What do they do?Underline the first real verb. If it is a form of be, or occur, make, conduct, perform, provide, facilitate, the real verb is nearby wearing a noun costume.
Concision is not a word count. One of these rewrites is longer than its original and enormously better. You are chasing the ratio of meaning to words — cutting a reduction was observed frees the room the actual numbers now occupy.