A long report is won or lost before a paragraph exists. Here is the charge as it actually arrived — “falls are up on 4 East, look into it” — and six lines you have to pin down before you gather anything. Swap each line for a tighter version and watch the rework risk fall, then see whether your boundary survives the request that always comes.
Six lines, three wordings each
For every element you get the charge as received, a half-fixed version, and one that could be signed. Click to swap it into the contract. Watch which line moves the meter most.
Day nine: the request arrives
You are three sections into the draft. This lands in your inbox. Choose your reply.
From the CNO, 09:14. “This is looking great. While you’re in there — could you also pull 5 West and 6 North so we can see how 4 East compares? Committee will ask.”